{"id":17128,"date":"2016-02-14T07:31:11","date_gmt":"2016-02-14T12:31:11","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/traceyarial.com\/blog\/?p=17128"},"modified":"2018-02-19T17:20:29","modified_gmt":"2018-02-19T22:20:29","slug":"points-of-departure","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/traceyarial.com\/blog\/en\/points-of-departure\/","title":{"rendered":"Points of Departure"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>My favourite nonfiction book is James Moffett&#8217;s Points of Departure. Moffett has collected 58 of his favourite examples of short narrative nonfiction to\u00a0display\u00a0five specific forms: interaction, notation, recollection, investigation and cogitation. The examples stem from 1919 until 1983. Each is a gem worth reading.<\/p>\n<p>His first example, the Coca Cola Grove Press Letters, is by far my favourite. It outlines letters between two corporate executives. The best\u00a0sentence summarizes the entire issue.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Accordingly, we have instructed all our salesmen to notify bookstores that whenever a customer comes in and asks for a copy of a Diary of a Harlem Schoolteacher they should request the sales personnel to make sure that what the customer wants is the book, rather than a Coke.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>This book is the best way to understand how to define and structure narrative nonfiction of almost any type. Every story in the book also tells a very concise entertaining story while teaching writers to structure their work. It also reminds us how timeless notable\u00a0nonfiction\u00a0can be.<\/p>\n<h2>Story: Consider nonfiction as an act of creation<\/h2>\n<p>Moffett chose his five forms of nonfiction based on what a writer does to create them. As he says in the introduction:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Whether amateur or professional, a prose writer does one of four things to generate the material of a composition. You recollect, investigate, invent or cogitate.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>The fifth form is interaction, and includes letters.<\/p>\n<h2>Structure: Purpose provides structure<\/h2>\n<p>By letting authors&#8217; works stand on their own, Moffett makes the point that purpose defines structure. His wide-ranging collection of narrative nonfiction samples range from two to ten pages long, but none takes even one word longer than necessary to make their very complicated points.<\/p>\n<h2>Style: Using Structure to Make a Point<\/h2>\n<p>Other than an eight-page introduction to the book and from\u00a0two sentences to two paragraphs prior to each sample, Moffett relies on selection and structure to make his case. This book is a great primer on structuring nonfiction prose.<\/p>\n<h2>Sound: Diverse clarity<\/h2>\n<p>No story in this book reads like any other, yet every one is well-written and clear.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>My favourite nonfiction book is James Moffett&#8217;s Points of Departure. Moffett has collected 58 of his favourite examples of short narrative nonfiction to\u00a0display\u00a0five specific forms: interaction, notation, recollection, investigation and cogitation. The examples stem from 1919 until 1983. Each is a gem worth reading. 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